Love it or Hate It, We All Need Help #OpenBook Blog Hop

 

May 29, 2023

We’ve talked blurbs before. Do you have any tips for writing blurbs?

Action words. Lots of action words. Limit passive words as much as possible. There isn’t a way to get rid of all of them, but careful word crafting can eliminate many of them.

Of course, the order you put those words in is important. That’s the tough part. I don’t remember how many revisions the blurb of my most recent release went thru, and how many people chipped in to help me fine-tune it. I have four files with different names and different versions. Blurb new, blurb new version, Rise blurb, and blurb final. Each file (except for the final one) has two or three drafts of the blurb.

The purpose of a blurb is to hook a potential reader by introducing the problem and hinting at the solution, without giving too much away. That’s my struggle-finding the line between the two.

Along with the blurb comes writing the tagline. Yes, there are folks who develop it before they ever start penning the story, but I often discover the tagline amid figuring out the blurb.

Here are a few of the taglines that were suggested for The Rise of Jake Hennessey: I have used 3 out of the 4 in publicity.

  • He’s a good man with an illegal hobby…
  • What does a semi-retired jewel thief do in his spare time? Help the victims of abuse disappear and start new lives, of course.
  • So much for retirement
  • Jake Hennessey: Bar owner (twice). Jewel thief (retired… almost). He’s a good guy, it’s just his hobby that’s illegal. Mostly. OK, completely.

So, my biggest tip for writing a blurb and tagline? Don’t be afraid to get assistance. It doesn’t even have to be from other authors, although they are a great resource. My cover artist has a great ear and helps me with both blurbs and taglines as well as creates brilliant covers.

I can’t reveal any great secrets for blurbs because I don’t know any! My best advice is revise, revise, revise. But perhaps some of the others on this blog hop can help. Check out their posts by following the links below.

As always, until next time, please stay safe.

May 29, 2023

We’ve talked blurbs before. Do you have any tips for writing blurbs?

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I Never Learned How To #OpenBook Blog Hop

May 22, 2023

What skill do you wish you had, either as a hobby or career builder?

As a teenager, I never got the hang of knitting. I learned how to crochet, but it wasn’t something I ever cared about. My thing was needlepoint, and I was good at it. But now that I am old, I have no desire to try knitting again.

I tried to learn how to split logs, but couldn’t aim correctly. Now I’m no longer strong enough. Besides, the new house has a gas fireplace, not a wood one.

Back in the days of singer-songwriters, I wanted to learn to play guitar and started teaching myself. That was in pre-internet days, and there were no YouTube videos to watch. It was a matter of looking at diagrams in books to figure out where to place my fingers on the strings. I mastered one chord before I had a bicycle accident and started to lose my hearing in one ear. I also had an arm in a sling and that made holding a guitar impossible. Then, I moved halfway across the country to go to college and my guitar got left behind.

But that’s what I’d like to do. Learn to play a musical instrument – even though my hearing is getting worse as I get older. I don’t know if there’d be something easier, but I’d be happy with a guitar. I’d start with “Sitting on the Dock of the Bay.” The chording for that is fairly simple. Even with my bad ear, I could play it. With today’s electronic tuners, i should be able to tune the strings!

Of course, the hearing loss has also made it difficult to sing in tune. So, I’d have to be content is being the backup for people who can sing.

I’m looking forward to hearing from the other authors on this hp about what skill they wish they had. You can find out by following the links below.

Until next time, please stay safe.

PS Don’t forget, The Rise of Jake Hennessey is now available! 

 

May 22, 2023

What skill do you wish you had, either as a hobby or career builder?

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Jake Is Back, One More Time #NewRelease

So much for retirement

For 22 years, semi-retired jewel thief Jake Hennessey honored his promise to stay away from Harmony Duprie. He has no plans to change that… until Special Agent Doan Houck saunters into Jake’s bar, claiming Harmony’s life is in danger.

She’s not the only one in jeopardy. Jake is run over by a motorcycle and is the target of a drive-by shooting. He doesn’t know who to trust. Not the feds Not the local cops.

Not even Harmony.

But Jake will do anything to protect his ex-lover. Even if it means matching wits with an FBI agent, revealing old secrets, or ending up in prison. Again.

If it comes down to saving his life or Harmony’s, there is no choice at all.

 

It’s been a decade since Jake Hennessey first appeared. He was supposed to be a background character, but he defied expectations and hung around through all of Harmony Duprie’s adventures. Then, of course, he wanted to tell his own story. I hope I’ve done him justice.

Here’s an excerpt:

Cloaked by the musty curtains of his third hotel room, Jake studied the traffic on the street below. He knew every unmarked car owned by the Oak Grove police, and two of them patrolled the neighborhood. Despite their presence, he’d been unable to determine their encrypted channel on the hacker’s scanner.

He turned away from the window, walked to the bedside table, and poured a second drink from the bottle Danny had left at the front desk. Doc Gabe would be upset with him, but Jake figured he deserved the break from abstinence. The doc had sighed while he studied the damage to Jake’s cast, and muttered something about sending him to a nursing home in Pittsburgh. It had been an empty threat.

Even flirting with Trina and Belinda at the clinic hadn’t eased his restlessness, and Jake paced as he sipped his whiskey. He planned meticulously for his heists, analyzing every contingency, leaving room for changing circumstances. It offered him a sense of control. He craved control. The current situation offered none.

He drained the glass and tilted his head up, letting the harsh liquid burn the back of his throat. A small, black spider wove a web where the wall and ceiling met. Jake had heard rumors about the Feds developing the technology to use robotic insects to bug a room, but not that they could spin silk. It seemed safe to ignore the spider.



You can buy the book at these on-line stores

Amazon https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0C59KDNNW

Nook (B&N) https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/books/1143484076?ean=2940161154397

Kobo https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/the-rise-of-jake-hennessey

applw https://books.apple.com/us/book/id6449169609

Apple is taking a bit to take the book live, but you can get it on pre-order.

 


Which Crayon Am I? #OpenBook Blog Hop

May 15, 2023

People are like a box of crayons, which crayon would you say that you are?

You know that crayon stuck in the back row? The one that’s cracked, but is still wrapped in paper? There are days that I feel like that crayon. Damaged, but useable.

That crayon can be hard to get out of the box, and is rarely gets pulled out. You may have to empty the entire box to get to it. 

 

 

The point may be dull but once in a while, you think it’s your favorite color. Until another color distracts you and you stick it back in the box. There it stays until you need it again. That’s me.

And you? Which crayon are you? Tell me in the comments. And don’t forget to check out the other authors by following the links below.

Until next time, please stay safe.

Don’t forget, The Rise of Jake Hennessey releases May 17th!

May 15, 2023

People are like a box of crayons, which crayon would you say that you are?

Rules:
1. Link your blog to this hop.
2. Notify your following that you are participating in this blog hop.
3. Promise to visit/leave a comment on all participants’ blogs.
4. Tweet/or share each person’s blog post. Use #OpenBook when tweeting.
5. Put a banner on your blog that you are participating.

 

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Only a Few More Days! The Rise of Jake Hennessey

 

I’m almost ready to load  this manuscript for The Rise of Jake Hennessey onto the normal sites . . . Amazon, Kobo, Barnes & Noble and Apple, so it will be available everywhere on May 17, only a few days away. While waiting for it to go live, I thought I’d share a quick snippet.

The glare of spotlights cracked through the acrid haze to illuminate what remained of the front of The Purple Onion. Blue and red strobes from emergency vehicles cast eerie patterns on the surrounding buildings. At the end of the block, cordoned off by police tape, a small crowd surveyed the action, analyzing each move of the firefighters and speculating on motives while avoiding the over-spray from fire hoses.

Jake stood planted in a puddle in the middle of the street, as close as the fire marshal allowed him to get, and wished for that tumbler of whiskey to erase the taste of smoke in his throat and ward off the early morning chill. Now that the fire was out, he had nothing to keep him warm except for the anger burning in his heart.

The Rise of Jake Hennessey

Have you seen the book’s description yet? No? Here it is.

For 22 years, semi-retired jewel thief Jake Hennessey honored his promise to stay away from Harmony Duprie. He has no plans to change that… until Special Agent Doan Houck saunters into Jake’s bar, claiming Harmony’s life is in danger.

She’s not the only one in jeopardy. Jake is run over by a motorcycle and is the target of a drive-by shooting. He doesn’t know who to trust. Not the feds Not the local cops.

Not even Harmony.

But Jake will do anything to protect his ex-lover. Even if it means matching wits with an FBI agent, revealing old secrets, or ending up in prison. Again.

If it comes down to saving his life or Harmony’s, there is no choice at all.

This book has been a long time in the making. The seeds for it were planted when I wrote The Marquesa’s Necklace ten some years ago. But I didn’t know that until after I finished writing The Ranger’s Dog Tags, and Jake decided to reveal his secrets. He’s been a fun character to write.

I can’t resist – one more excerpt before I go.  Then join me on the 17th for release day!

Cloaked by the musty curtains of his third hotel room, Jake studied the traffic on the street below. He knew every unmarked car owned by the Oak Grove police, and two of them patrolled the neighborhood. Despite their presence, he’d been unable to determine their encrypted channel on the hacker’s scanner.

He turned away from the window, walked to the bedside table, and poured a second drink from the bottle Danny had left at the front desk. Doc Gabe would be upset with him, but Jake figured he deserved the break from abstinence. The doc had sighed while he studied the damage to Jake’s cast, and muttered something about sending him to a nursing home in Pittsburgh. It had been an empty threat.

Even flirting with Trina and Belinda at the clinic hadn’t eased his restlessness, and Jake paced as he sipped his whiskey. He planned meticulously for his heists, analyzing every contingency, leaving room for changing circumstances. It offered him a sense of control. He craved control. The current situation offered none.

He drained the glass and tilted his head up, letting the harsh liquid burn the back of his throat. A small, black spider wove a web where the wall and ceiling met. Jake had heard rumors about the Feds developing the technology to use robotic insects to bug a room, but not that they could spin silk. It seemed safe to ignore the spider.

 


Something to Eat, Drink, and Listen To #OpenBook Blog Hop

May 8, 2023

How do you get ready for a long writing session?

I thought this would be an easy question to answer until I stopped to think about it, and how long it’s been since I had a really long writing session. I’ve lost my focus. All the changes I’ve gone through in the last year have messed with my internal equilibrium. Even writing these blog posts takes me forever as I start, get distracted, and have to come back to them.

My current distractions? Too many to list, but they include identifying the flowers and birds in my yard. Spotted what I think was an Eastern meadowlark today, but it flew away before I got a good look at it. And my yard is filled with pinkish-white flowers that I think are cuckoo flowers. I can’t find much information about them in my locale, so I’m not sure. The plant identifier sites barely mention the possibility of them in my area.



I’m also getting ready for the release of The Rise of Jake Hennessey and having fun creating memes, spending time on free photo sites and manipulating them in Canva. Have you seen one of them on social media? Here’s the latest.

 

Okay, back to business. After I check my email. All three of them.  And check the view out my window as the daylight fades. Where were we?

Oh yeah, how do I settle in for a long writing session? First, I have to refill my water bottle. Water is my choice of beverage, although it gets boring. Then, I need to choose a snack. Reese’s Pieces are a good option, but I have to limit my intake. Cheese cubes are a healthy alternative. Next, I put on my headphones and pick an artist or playlist. John Denver remains a top choice, along with classic rock. Something I’ve heard enough that I don’t have to concentrate on the words but can only half-listen to without feeling like I’m missing anything. It  helps block the urge to hop on the internet and browse. Although I’ve been listening to 80’s music as a background for my WIP and getting distracted because I’m discovering artists I didn’t pay attention to back when the music was popular.

Where was I? How about the other authors on this loop? How do they get ready for a long writing session? Find out by following the links below. 

Until next time, please stay safe.

May 8, 2023

How do you get ready for a long writing session?

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3. Promise to visit/leave a comment on all participants’ blogs.
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What Inspires My Writing #IWSG

 
Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!
Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer – aim for a dozen new people each time – and return comments. This group is all about connecting!

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

The awesome co-hosts for the May 3 posting of the IWSG are Joylene Nowell Butler,Ronel Janse van Vuuren,Meka James,Diane Burton,Victoria Marie Lees, and M Louise Barbour!

Every month, we announce a question that members can answer in their IWSG post. These questions may prompt you to share advice, insight, a personal experience or story. Include your answer to the question in your IWSG post or let it inspire your post if you are struggling with something to say.

May 3 question – When you are working on a story, what inspires you?

What I am inspired by depends upon the story, but music is the constant. What music depends on what mood I am in. Sometimes it’s classic rock, sometimes it’s Celtic, but singer songwriters like John Denver, Buffy Sainte Marie and Joni Mitchell are my fallbacks. Although lately, I’ve been following several YouTube reaction channels, because they remind me of music I loved but that I lost track of.

The other thing I’ve added to my playlists are 1980s country, because my WIP references songs from that time frame, and it wasn’t anything I followed back in the day. But those songs are part of the way I’m trying to recreate the time period and the atmosphere of scenes. 

But my biggest inspirations come from the characters themselves. I may start off knowing where I want the story to go, but as I get to know my characters, they will tell me what I’m doing wrong. Yes, I have changed my plot because the characters have convinced me their way of doing things is better. It happens more often than not. They will also tell me if I am writing a stand-alone or a series.

One quick sidenote- my new book, The Rise of Jake Hennessey, releases May 17th. Watch for it on this blog. 

Check out some of the links below to find out where other authors get their inspiration.  Until next time, please stay safe!