Moving From Start to Finish #OpenBook Blog Hop

Dec 18, 2023

Describe your steps for moving from a story idea to a finished story.

Steps? You think I have standard steps? Are you trying to make me laugh?

Thing is, my process can vary from story to story. I’m a ‘pantser’ writer. That means I don’t have a plot and outline before I start writing. My stories are very much ‘discovered’ as I put words on paper. Even when I have a basic storyline in my head, my characters change things around on me.

Take Tasha from Wolves’ Knight, for example. I had a sweet little romance all planned out for her. Even wrote a first kiss scene, taking place at the top of a waterfall on a moonlit night in a remote wooded area. Where would that kiss lead? I never found out. Tasha protested. Told me I was hooking her up with the wrong guy. (Yes, my characters and I have animated discussions. Some might call them arguments.) When I figured out who she wanted to be involved with, I couldn’t believe it. I had to go back and make small changes to make it happen, but she was right. The book was better because of it.

But here’s my basic process, subject to revision at a character’s whim. I get an idea for a story-it may be something that comes in a dream, or creeps up on me as I’m working on something else, or it may rattle around in my head for years. (Take my current work in process. I wrote the first draft over ten years ago. And I still want to add another book to the Free Wolves series. I haven’t touched that series since 2019.)

Now that I have an idea, I start writing. I start at the beginning of the story and write the book straight through to the end, without jumping around. The exception is when I go back and add or change things because my characters insist.

Once I’ve gotten to the end, it’s time for revisions. There’s lots of advice about taking at least two weeks off from the story, but that never works out for me. I always want to dive in and start fixing things immediately. There’s a lot of editing/revising that happens. Everything from fixing one or two words to cutting entire scenes. (My last release, The Rise of Jake Hennessey, went through at least five rounds of editing. I lost count.)

At that point, the story is done. As an indie author, there are more steps to getting it ready for publication. Formatting, copywrite, cover, etc.

That’s how I do things, anyway. Other authors may do it differently. Let’s find out by checking in with the rest of the participants on this hop. Check out the links below.

FYI, because of the holidays, there won’t be a blog hop the next couple of weeks. Whatever you celebrate this time of year, may your days be happy/merry/blessed/bright. (And safe.) See you again in January!

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Top Five Writing Events 2023 #OpenBook Blog Hop

Dec 11, 2023

Tell us the top five best things that have happened to you in the past year. (Focus on writing, but other things are allowed!)

1. The release of The Rise of Jack Hennessey.
This story was a passion project. Although the Harmony Duprie Mysteries officially ended with The Ranger’s Dog Tags, I knew in my heart that the story wasn’t over. Harmony, Eli, and Jake couldn’t just fade into the sunset. There was more to the overall story, and it could only be told through the eyes of Jake.

For 22 years, semi-retired jewel thief Jake Hennessey honored his promise to stay away from Harmony Duprie. He has no plans to change that… until Special Agent Doan Houck saunters into Jake’s bar, claiming Harmony’s life is in danger.

2. Finishing the first draft of Book One of The Edwards Agency (the new version).
Or maybe The Edwards Investigations, Book One, The Rimer File. (Is that too long?) I’m still determining the title. This book has been in the works for over a decade. The first story was written as part of a NaNoWriMo project and has been reworked several times. But I knew it wasn’t ‘right.’ I took the story in a different direction, so the current draft is more of an homage to the first attempt than a revision. The ending still doesn’t have the ‘punch’ it needs, but I keep reworking it in my head and it’s getting there.

It started as a romance and has turned in a noir female PI tale set in Pittsburgh PA in the mid-1980s. My graphic artist says it’s so noir it’s black.

3. The many local events I took part in.
I didn’t sell huge numbers at any one event, but the cumulative numbers are satisfying. I know which ones I want to repeat and the new ones I want to try next year. As always, the best part of selling at events in the amazing people I meet.

4. Hitting the top #100
I hit the top #100 in three minor categories on Amazon with The Fall of Jake Hennessey on April 30. The book made it up to #11 in Heist Crime, #14 in Heist Thrillers, and #39 in Crime Action & Adventure. It didn’t stay there, but it made my day.

5. A non-writing related one
Now that I’m back in western Pennsylvania, I’m reconnecting with my siblings. Oh, we kept in contact through social media, but I didn’t realize how much I missed being able to sit and talk with them face-to-face. Heck, I’m close enough to be able to drop in for a chat without having to drive cross-country!

And there they are – my top five best things for the year. What good things have been part of your life this past year? And check out the other authors by following the links.

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Someday, When I Grow Up #OpenBook Blog Hop

Dec 4, 2023

As a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?

Cowboy. Astronaut. Doctor. I didn’t want to be any of those. The first thing I remember wanting to be when I grew up was a hermit. The idea of living in a small cabin in the woods filled with books seemed like an ideal setup. (And no, there was no cat in the picture.)

Of course, I was too young to think of the practicalities. How would I get food? I also always wanted to be a pioneer. Davy Crocket or Daniel Boone, depending on my mood. They were pretty interchangeable to my young mind.

As I got older, I wavered between wanting to be a librarian or a forest ranger. I considered a career with the CIA, probably inspired by Dorothy Gilman’s The Unexpected Mrs. Pollifax series. (I gave up when I realized I was no good with languages other than English.)  I had no interest in traditional female jobs like teaching or nursing.

I’ve done many jobs in my life, but the only one from the list above is librarian. I worked as a part-time librarian in a small town public library. The job only lasted about a year because we moved away. I never got to be a hermit—although life in Covid-years made it feel that way sometimes—and the closest I got to being a forest ranger was introducing girls in Girl Scouts to the joys of the out of doors. The career I retired from didn’t exist back when I was a child.

 

How about you? What did you want to be when you grew up? Find out about our authors and there plans by following the links below.

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