A Favorite Piece of Literature #OpenBook Blog Hop

 
August 9, 2021
Do you have a favorite piece of literature? What is it and why is it your favorite??
 
This will be a quick one, because I am on the road and writing from yet another hotel room.
 
I’m guessing that I can’t claim one of my own books. It would be hard to pick only one of them, anyway. Oh, you want to know?
 
I’d choose Wolves’ Gambit. It’s probably the book that has sold the least, but I think the plot and characterization is among the best of what I’ve written. (Although The Ranger’s Dog Tags comes in a close second.) I really like Tasha, my main character, but I have a fondness for the underdog. Which she is. I’ve considered writing another story featuring her, but it hasn’t happened – yet.
 
Now, on to my real answer.
 
Anne McCaffery remains one of my favorites, specifically the Harper Hall trilogy of the Dragonriders of Pern series. Yes, my favorites don’t include a dragonrider as the main character! I told you I have a thing for the underdog. By the time McCaffrey wrote this stories, she’d established her world and was able to concentrate on the plot more than the environment around them. Frankly, if you look back to her dragonriders as a whole, you can see how rough her first few books were, and how much smoother her later stories flowed. (I won’t include the books written by her son in the analysis – they don’t live up to her standards, in my opinion. Even including the non-dragonrider books McCaffrey wrote, The Harper Hall books remain my favorite. 
 
I’ll be dropping in on our other authors as time permits, but I hope you’ll go visit them, too. All you need to do is follow the links below.
 
That’s it for this week! As always, until next time, please stay safe.
 
 
 
August 9, 2021
Do you have a favorite piece of literature? What is it and why is it your favorite??
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Fighting the Fear #OpenBook Blog Hop

 

July 26, 2021

Write a scene or story that includes a character who has a phobia. What do they fear? How does this phobia affect their life?

I decided to write a scene involving two of my favorite characters from the Harmony Duprie Mysteries. Harmony and Eli. For those of you who have read the series, this scene would fall between the The Contessa’s Brooch and The Samurai’s Inro. At the end of The Contessa’s Brooch, Harmony had promised Eli that she would fly down to Florida to start working for him, and he had promised her that he’d use the company’s jet to pick her up instead of making her take a commercial flight when he figured out she has a fear of flying.
*****

The path on my maps app showed our path going straight, but Eli had flipped on his turn signal. Had he changed his mind, and we were driving to Florida? I could hope. “This isn’t our turn,” I said as I put my phone in my lap and wiped my sweaty palms on my jeans. He’d told me to dress for comfort.

“The jetport has its own exit.” A wide grin lightened his face. “You’re in for a treat.”

“Nothing that has to do with getting on an airplane is fun.” I wiggled in my padded and heated seat. “This is a nice car. I’d love to take it for a long drive with you. Like all the way to Florida.”

“We’ll make that happen some day, Harmony. But not this time. I have a full slate of meetings tomorrow, and you need to be there for a few of them as part of your training.” He patted my knee.

“I got myself into this fix, didn’t I? I should have never accepted the offer to work for you.” It had seemed like a good idea. I had a hard time resisting when he batted his pale blue eyes at me.

He laughed. “I’m not going to need to pull a Mr. T. intervention on you, am I?”

“Mr. T.?”

“Old TV show. The tough guy on a team had a fear of flying. They had to come up with creative ways to drug him and get him on a plane to their next job almost every week.”

“I thought that soda you bought for me tasted funny. You didn’t…”

“No, I wouldn’t. But I’m not afraid to throw you over my shoulder and carry you onto the jet if I need to.”

“One time. One time you pulled that trick. And we were headed to the bedroom, not an airplane, and I wasn’t fighting.”

“That sounds like a challenge.” He turned onto a side road. “We can test it tonight. I’ll carry you to my bed. At my house. In Florida. That’s another benefit of taking the company jet.”

“Good selling point, but what else can you throw in to sweeten the pot?”

“Comfy leather chains you can stretch out in? Your pick of adult beverages, including your favorite wine? Not needing to go through TSA security or wait in line to board? Me to keep you company?”

“They all sound nice.” I wasn’t sold, I laid my hand on my thigh and and squeezed to hide the trembling.

Eli pulled into a parking spot but didn’t turn off the engine. He turned to me and put his hand on my shoulder. “You never have told me why you’re afraid to fly.”

“I never told you I was afraid to fly.”

He moved his hand and rubbed my neck just below my bun. “You didn’t need to say the words.”

I leaned into the massage, and the tautness in my muscles eased. His phone rang, and I missed the warmth of his touch when he answered it.

Eli’s side of the conversation was mostly words of acknowledgment, and I wondered who he was talking to. It wasn’t a normal business discussion. “We’ll be in the lounge when you are ready,” he said. “See you soon.”

He turned off the car. “That was Andy, my pilot. He’ll be landing soon. It’ll take a while to do paperwork, refuel, and he takes a break. We can wait in the visitors’ area.”

Every muscle in my body tensed. “I can’t do this, Eli.”

“One step at a time, Harmony. We’re just going inside and get a drink and use the restroom. You don’t even have to take your luggage. Andy will handle it. Okay? That way I can hold your hand.”

I swallowed back the lump in my throat.

He got out of the car, came around to the passenger’s side, opened the door, and crouched beside me. “Tell me what’s going on.”

“Blame it on my parents.” The bitter words dripped from my mouth.

He scrunched an eyebrows. “I thought they died in a mountain-climbing accident.”

“They did. I took them to the airport for their trip and they never came back. I don’t have a fear of flying, I have a fear of abandonment. Me abandoning everyone else. But only with airplanes. I don’t want to go somewhere and never return It’s not logical, but there it is.”

“And all those times I’ve left you, you’ve never said a word.”

“Because somehow I always knew you’d be back, and it was okay.”

Eli stood, stretched, and smiled. “There’s your answer! It’s logical. As long as we are together, we’ll both be okay. Right?”

I mulled over the logic, looking for flaws, and didn’t find any. “It can’t be that easy.”

“No, but it’s a start. Let’s go inside.” He held out his hand.

After undoing my seatbelt, I accepted his help to get out of the car. I stood glued to the spot, searching for courage.

He slipped his arm around my waist. “It’s only to the lounge. One step at a time.”

How had I’d missed it? Eli was my courage. I leaned into him. “One step at a time. But we’re going to discuss the fact that you’re taking it for granted we’ll be sharing a bed tonight.”
*****

To read what our other authors have to say about their character’s phobias, follow the links below. And, until next time, please stay safe!

 

July 26, 2021

Write a scene or story that includes a character who has a phobia. What do they fear? How does this phobia affect their life?

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Creativity By The Sundial #OpenBook Blog Hop

July 19, 2021

Is there a certain time of day when you are most creative? When you handle the ‘business’ side of writing? What’s your favorite time of day?

My bedroom faces south. Despite the room-darkening curtains, daylight has a habit of sneaking in long before I’m

Image by Miriam Pereluk from Pixabay

ready for it. I can roll over and ignore it for only so long until I succumb to its invitation and crawl out of bed.

But those early mornings, while I’m sipping on a glass of orange juice or a cup of tea, are the perfect time to check emails and social media. I can be productive while getting my brain warmed up. Just in time to go to work!

The evening brings another round of social media—some sites may be different. There’s always the check to see if I’ve sold any books, or if there are publicity opportunities i need to take advantage of. There may be chores to be done, supper to be cooked and eaten, or any number of errands.

Once the sun has set, and life has slowed down, my fingers itch for the keyboard. All those ideas that have niggled at the back of my brain all day seek release. That’s when I can shut out the rest of the world, put on some music, and crawl into the worlds I create and spend time with my characters. 

That time is never long enough. Hours after dark, I have to watch the clock. Much as I hate it, I can’t write as until the words run out. Real life interrupts. I’m too old to operate without enough sleep.

What’s my favorite time of day? It depends upon what day of the week it is, and what season. Each day brings new joys. Perhaps it’s the moment of a summer day when the temperature is just right and the birds are calling their joy. Or that minute when a gentle snow starts falling at night and glows in the light shining from the windows  of the house. Maybe it’s that second when I read what I’ve just written, sit back, and say “Damn, that’s good.”

Those all are contenders. But none of them match the eternity when my husband and I pass each other in the hallway or in the kitchen and he reaches out to touch me. 

What about you? What’s your favorite time of day? Tell us about it in the comments, if you’d like to share. In the meantime, let’s check out what the other authors have to say by following the links below.

And, as always, until next time, please stay safe.

July 19, 2021

Is there a certain time of day when you are most creative? When you handle the ‘business’ side of writing? What’s your favorite time of day?

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Audiobooks – The Future or a Fad? #OpenBook Blog Hop

July 12, 2021

Are audiobooks the future of book sales? Do you have your stories on audio?

First it was large print books and books for the blind. Then there were books on tape. Now we moved into proprietary formats based on what platform you listen on. Alternative ways of reading have been around for years.

I own copies of James Bond books as MP3s that I got back in the late 90s. (I think – I’ve transferred them from one PC to another so many times that I’ve lost track of when I got them.) I listened to them when I was doing chores that didn’t demand my total attention but found my enjoyment was based on the voice of the narrator—when the narrator changed in the middle of the series I didn’t like it—and I never got ‘addicted’ to the format.

To be honest, I don’t understand people who listen to audiobooks when they’re driving. I need to concentrate on the road, and the radio is background noise to keep me company, especially on long drives. I can’t imagine trying to pay attention to a book and still giving traffic the needed attention. Even on the long, flat, lonely stretches of Wyoming roads, you never know when someone is going  to fly around you doing over 100 mph. Obviously, that changes if you are the passenger and someone else is driving.

Are audiobooks the future? Maybe, in the same way that ebooks were the future not too long ago. There will always be an audience for all forms of books – print, ebook, and audio, as well as any form that hasn’t been invented yet. (Neural implant, anyone?)

I’ve looked into audio for my books. (NOT Audible, because that’s part of the Amazon monopoly.) I looked is as far as it’s gone. The price to have audio books done right is out of my budget and I don’t have the skills or equipment to do it myself. It’s more than just reading your story out loud. I think I’m an expressive reader, but I am aware of the slight mistakes I make. To have a recording edited to make it error-free would be more work than many editors would tackle. I need to sell many more of my books before an audio book would fit into my plans.

We have authors on this hop that have audiobooks, and I’m looking forward to their input. You can find them by following the links below.

As always, until next time, please stay safe.

July 12, 2021

Are audiobooks the future of book sales? Do you have your stories on audio?

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Adeus, Do svidaniya, Annyeong, Au Revoir, Auf Wiedersehen, Goodbye #IWSG

 

Welcome to another month, and a new Insecure Writer’s Support group. This month’s topic is: What would make you quit writing?
The awesome co-hosts for the July 7 posting of the IWSG are Pat Garcia, Victoria Marie Lees, and Louise – Fundy Blue!

I’ve thought about it. Quitting, that is. When the book sales are non-existent and the reviews aren’t tumbling in, it’s hard to keep putting pen to paper. Or fingers to the keyboard.

But although selling books feeds my ego, that’s not why I started writing.

I started writing because I have these stories tumbling around in my head. Characters who talk to me and keep me company and make me laugh and make me cry. Even if I never publish another book, I’ll still want to capture these tales and figure out what they have to teach me. Even if I stop sharing my books with the public, I can’t imagine that I will ever stop writing.

Those words may never even make it to paper. Some stories are better left floating around the interior of my brain. That’s still writing, as far as I’m concerned.

So, back to the original question. What would make me quit writing? Nothing. As long as I can form coherent thoughts, I’ll keep writing. That’s just part of who I am.

 

Don’t forget to check out some of the other posts on this hop by following the links below. As, as always, until next time, please stay safe.


The Curse of the Question Mark #OpenBook Blog Hop

June 28, 2021

Do you use said or asked after a ? or tag your interruptions? Any punctuation that bugs you? What’s the hardest for you to get right?

The first thing I thought about when I saw this topic was how to make the post funny, but a comedian I am not. Not for lack of trying, but my sense of humor is warped. People don’t get my attempts at humor, and I have to admit, I’m not that funny. So, you’re stuck with me answering this as blandly as possible. Hopefully, it won’t be that bad.

Punctuation is hard. I don’t get it right 100% of the time. Thank heavens for good editors. But the question mark question I have covered. If I add a tag to a sentence that ends in a question mark, it’s always asked or questioned, but it’s never said.  That wouldn’t make sense to me. I suppose it’s possible that a person asks a question in a monotone and using said would work, but I don’t believe I’ve ever written a sentence like that. I have written sentences that grammar programs have interpreted as questions when they aren’t, and then I confuse the computer by refusing to change the period to a question mark. But there’s no ask or said involved.

Is there punctuation that bugs me? Let’s talk quotation marks. Why is there a difference in usage of question marks between the United State and part of Europe? They use the single quote to mark dialogue.  ‘Punctuation is the devil,’ rather than the double quotes we use in the US “Punctuation is the devil.” How did that happen and why? Who thought that was a good idea?

And is there punctuation I struggle with? Besides almost all of it? Let’s talk dashes. Why do we need three forms of dashes? Not two, but three. You have the dash – the en-dash – and the em-dash —. The rules of how and why to use each other is enough to make a writer’s s head spin and a grammarian’s heart sing, and I’m not going to try to explain them here. I don’t think I’d do a good job. Feel free to give yourself a headache and research them in your favorite fashion.

What about you? What punctuation do you struggle with? Let’s commiserate in the comments. And don’t forget to check out the other authors on the hop by checking out the links below.

As always, until next time, stay safe.

June 28, 2021

Do you use said or asked after a ? or tag your interruptions? Any punctuation that bugs you? What’s the hardest for you to get right?

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Picking A Beta Partner for Writing #OpenBook Blog Hop

 

June 21, 2021

If you could choose one author, living or dead, to be your beta partner, who would it be and why?

I’ve been pondering this question all week. Through writing, I’ve met so many good authors either in person and on-line, that picking one is nearly impossible.

Then I hit my forehead with my palm in that classic gesture, because  I don’t have to pick. I already have several!

First up. I’d like you to meet Cornelia Amiri. Cornelia and I were matched through a Yahoo news group back when I was getting ready to publish my first book, and we’ve been beta reading and critiquing for each other ever since. I love her stories, which lean heavily on Celtic myths and legends, although she also writes steampunk, and science-fiction.. I’ve learned a lot from her stories! You can check out her books at https://www.amazon.com/Cornelia-Amiri/e/B002BLFENY%3Fref=dbs_a_mng_rwt_scns_share.

I’m not an expert on Celtic gods and goddesses. And that’s good, because it allows me to concentrate on the story line. (Her shapeshifters are different from mine!) We’ve learned each other’s weak points and what we do well. She points out places where I can add emotion to my writing. I find places where her timeline is messed up. She finds phrases that I over-use; I find where the spelling of an archaic Gaelic name switches spelling in the middle of the story. We make each other better writers, and I appreciate all the help and encouragement she’s given me.

But there’s more! I belong to an on-line critique group, and there are a few folks there who I trade critiques with on an ongoing basis. Sure, the quality of the critiques varies, but even the bad ones give me insight into things that I can improve. I won’t mention them by name here because I don’t know their real names, only what they use on the site. One of the best parts about the site is that it attracts writers from all over the world. Not only am I getting suggestions from writers from varied backgrounds, I’m receiving suggestions based on different cultures. (and English usage- it threw me the first time I say quotations marked with a single quote versus a double one ( ‘ not “))

For the sake of the discussion, I’m going to call out one writer I’d live to work with – Jenna Bennett, author of the Savannah Martin Mysteries, as well as others. She’s a USA Today and New York Times best-selling hybrid author, publishing both with traditional publishers as well as indie with a knack for telling a good story. I think she’d be interesting to work with.

When I started writing novels, I didn’t expect it to lead to new friendships. Boy, did I have a lot to learn!

By the way, I’d love to work with the authors on this hop. But I can’t choose all of them, so I chose none. But to see who each of them chose, just follow the links below.

And, until next time, please stay safe.

June 21, 2021

If you could choose one author, living or dead, to be your beta partner, who would it be and why?

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Welcome to The Ranger’s Dog Tags – Readings From My Books

To help stir up interest in The Ranger’s Dog Tags, I’ve been reading snippets from each of the previous books in the Harmony Duprie series. Unfortunately, the files are too large to post here, so I thought I’d share the links. (sorry, they point to Facebook.) I’ll add new links as I have them.

The Marquesa’s Necklace https://www.facebook.com/100007362439366/videos/2720226481566073

Her Ladyship’s Ring   https://www.facebook.com/100007362439366/videos/2720880144834040

The Baron’s Cufflinks  https://www.facebook.com/100007362439366/videos/2721560298099358

 


Book Descriptions – You Gotta Love ‘Em (Or Not) #OpenBook Blog Hop

 

April 19, 2021

Let’s talk about book descriptions. Do you write yours before or after you write the story?

I’m what is known in the writing world as a pantser. That means I write my stories by the seat of my pants. I may have a beginning and an end in mind. but everything in between is up for grabs. My characters determine what happens – and sometimes they change everything!

As a result, book descriptions have to wait until I’m done writing the story. Then they go through any number of revisions. I’ve never gotten it right on the first try. Truth is, I made a revision to the tagline of my newest book, The Ranger’s Dog Tags, less than a week before I started uploading files to the various ebook stores.

Here’s how it ended up:

Tagline: It isn’t the first time Eli Hennessey has disappeared. Is it the last?

Eli Hennessey has vanished.

His house in Oak Grove is in flames, his cell phone is out of commission, and friends in Florida can’t find him. It’s up to Harmony Duprie to track down her missing lover before her life shatters and his ends.

Harmony’s first discovery: Eli tricked her into signing paperwork putting her in charge of his company. Had he planned his disappearance?

The answers won’t be found in Oak Grove. Harmony hightails it to Florida in search of Eli and the truth.

The Ranger’s Dog Tags, Book 6 of the Harmony Duprie Mysteries, is the final book of the series.

It seems so simple now, but I lost sleep over it. (That’s only a slight exaggeration.) There were several nights I brooded over the wording before falling asleep. Once I was mostly satisfied with it, I shared it with fellow writers who told me  what I’d done wrong and helped me revise it again. And again. And then a different bunch of people switched it up yet again. It’s a lot of work.

It’s a good thing I didn’t write the description before I wrote the book. I had plans for Harmony that never made it into the story. Plus, I knew at least one person was going to die. I just didn’t know who. Or how many.

I know other authors who are plotters. They have their entire book outlined before they ever start writing. They could do the descriptions first. I don’t envy them – it’s more fun to ‘discover’ the story along the way, in my humble opinion.

Let’s find out if anyone on this hop writes their descriptions before they write their books. It’s easy. Just follow the links below.

Until next time, please stay safe!

April 19, 2021

Let’s talk about book descriptions. Do you write yours before or after you write the story?

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The Action’s in the Back #OpenBook Blog Hop

 

Jan 25, 2021

What’s your best technique for working around backstory dumps??

The long-winded story of how two clans became mortal enemies. The intricate description of the landscape for miles and miles. The tale of the little girl and her imaginary best friend. Most writers know the pain of trying to figure out where the story really starts.

I’m guilty. I recently chopped off about 600 words from the beginning of The Ranger’s Dog Tags. They weren’t really backstory, but because I referred to the same info later in the chapter, I decided I didn’t need to tell the reader about it twice. It also allowed me to start the story at a more exciting point. 

The squad car screamed down the street, its red and blue lights tearing through the darkness. I feathered the gas pedal and waited for a second set of headlights that followed.

Because this is the sixth (and last) book in the Harmony Duprie series, I had to pay close attention to backstory. I never explained why Eli has a house in both Oak Grove, north of Pittsburgh, and in Florida, since it wasn’t important to the plot. (Eli is the main male character in the series.)

But what do I do when I have backstory to work in? I try to attach it to dialogue. Maybe not as part of the dialogue itself, but in conjunction with it.

“Your Chief Sorenson asked me to pass on a message,” Horace said. “Stephen Sallis is out of prison, on compassionate release. He has an untreatable cancer. Sorenson said to be careful.”

I caught my breath. Sallis was the minor crime figure with delusions of grandeur who’d been responsible for the disaster that played out after Jake gave me a replica of a stolen necklace. I’d had a minor part in his capture. Would he show up seeking revenge? “You think I’m in danger?”

Short and sweet. Then I moved on to advance the story. 

 It’s not always that easy. Sometimes I have to write several paragraphs of backstory. Stories from Eli’s time in the Army Rangers play a prominent part of the book. But rather than tell the tale all at once, I feed it to the reader in little bits and pieces. 

On the other hand, I’m toying with Jake’s origin story.  I don’t know what I’m going to do with it, but it’s been fun to delve into his history. In a way, the whole darn thing is backstory. (Jake is the anti-hero on the series. The book revolves around his relationship with Harmony Duprie before the events in The Marquesa’s Necklace.)

Anyway, that’s my trick. Try to intersperse dribs and drabs of the backstory throughout the story. Enough to give the reader a sense of the history without overwhelming them. Now, I’m going to follow the links below and see what everyone else does to slip in backstory.

P.S. I haven’t set a release date for The Ranger’s Dog Tags yet, but I’m getting closer. Stay tuned!

Until next time, please stay safe.

Jan 25, 2021

What’s your best technique for working around backstory dumps??

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